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Over There

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Farther down the beach
The sand is softer.
It shines in the night
A bright white.
Millions of grains,
Of just sand,
Nothing else.

Looking down,
Seeing dark red blood in the middle
Recoiling at the sight.
Somebody died here.
Slowly a tear,
A hot tear falls,
then more and more.

Turning around,
Running away,
Trying to forget
what has been seen.
Images burnt in the mind.
Wanting memories to vanish.
Not wanting to live any longer.
I have no fucking idea XD
i was listening to Shalott by Emilie Autumm, and the ending turned out that way because the song changed to City by Hollywood Undead :P
I don't think this one is done too well haha.
Also my goal in this one was not to say "I, me, you, she, he, her, him, his, etc.." :P
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Moleboi's avatar
Excellent imagery you got going here :)

When I started reading I was not expected it to move in the direction it did. Am glad I read this :D